Poem -
Distant Dreams.
In distant dreams my love would 'oft appear,
In awe she wanders Springtime's vibrant hills,
As wild bird songs exalt with merry cheer,
'Mid lesser celandine and daffodils.
In this majestic slumber I am lost,
Her beauty fair to woo my smitten eye,
From sprouting buds 'till blooms bedecked with frost,
Her lips afar, I wish our kiss be nigh.
My minds eye sees her prance lush meadows green,
While cirrus sky beholds her countenance,
On Nature's throne, she reigns as Noble Queen,
I yearn to tread those fields in fiery dance.
If I held all my dreams since life begun,
I'd hap'ly fling them all away... but one !
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The imagery in this sonnet is truly beautiful Mick, I really enjoyed this.
Lorna x
Much Appreciated Lorna....x
WOW MIZZY!!.....this is the kind of painting you hang upon memories gallery of loveliness....... BEAUTIFUL word choices here....... reminds me of one of the old classic poets......" Robert Herrick"...... you should check him out some time.......PINNED......smokin' grooves brother poet!!
Many thanks Tony.......Appreciated!ย
There areย few poets left who know how to make the curve of a word shape a line of poetry and have it do what they need it to do; to sound asย they need it to sound.
Mick...with your (too few and far between) offerings you have claimed, time and again, your rightful place amongst the few.
This is a work of beauty, my friend.
J ;)
You don't just write great poetry J......you leave great comments also....
Much appreciated. ......Mick.
;)
Hi ย Mizzy Such a beautiful sonnetย your wordsย
are such a pleasure to readย
Great write!ย
Best wishes Debsย
Thank you so much Deborah ....
Regards Mick.
Great poem Mick you have a real talent with words :)
Thank you for reading Wendy.....
Regards Mick.
Dear Mick,
In this dream I walk with you
In this dream the birds and the bees
Pay homage to your beauty
In this dream we dance
And our lips gently brush together
Oh dream of dreams
You surpass all others
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Much Appreciated ย Larry....Thank you !