Don't let niggaz change u
Don't let these niggaz change you. All women in our own ways are forever beautiful. Don't let these niggas make you into something disgraceful. Keep to the kinds words that your parents use to tell you. Women we mean more than we realize. Don't keep letting these no goods tell you otherwise. Women please don't let these niggaz change you.
women we are more than our make up. We are more than our breast and curves. We are worth more than sex object these men observe. The way men view and treat women is so absurd. Being a hoe is never the cure. Showing yourself love and being pure. Stop allowing these dudes opinions change you. Please don't let these niggaz change you.
Us women need to value ourselves more. I know being raped hurts to the core. Don't let it destroy you, become something more. Don't allow yourself to stay victim and be torn. Don't let it turn you into corner workers and sex slaves. Don't let a man or yourself take what your worth and have you depraved. Women let's step up with success and be brave. Tell our stories to the lost and let us and them be saved. Just remember, please don't let these niggaz change you.
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Loved making this poem.
Hello Alexi...
Welcome to Cosmo!
ββββββWOW!
I hope you live these words and don't change into the everyday women who share so much of their bodies and souls together with the World...
They may get the attention and the men but, the best treasure of all is the hardest to find...
You can find a lot of things above the surface, but the Great value is always hidden...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback back and kind words. They mean a lot to me.Β
and no problem that's the goal. And I plan to share much more.Β Β
I accidentally made it a separate comment but the below one was for youΒ
Sorry...... maybe.....a noble attempt....... but not even close to poetic........ peace......T
You would think so.Β
Keep to the kinds words that your parents use to tell you. - Well said
Thank you so much
Apologies dear poet...I totally took that the wrong way...... poetry is poetry.... and you did a good job with this...... keep writing..... you're good!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!....T xo
? your writing is your voice and it is your choice the words you use. I dearly hope you didn't mean to offend by your word... it is rather a derogatory word. it was written well, and I do praise you for that.
that word is forever rooted in racism. for that,Β I will have no part of the word.
but that's just me.Β
I suppose it get a lot of comments
if you don't mind me asking...
why do you feel you have to say that word?Β
As I'm sure you have all thought on the way of me using the word. But know my background and where I'm from and my ethnicity before speaking on anything. I was not saying it in any offensive way. The poem was towards all men not just black men. My father is African American himself. Which also makes me half African American. Sorry if I did in someway shape or form offend anyone I'm sorry. But before trying and or thinking I'm a racist. Know your facts before speaking. Please and thank you have a nice day.
you didn't offend me not did I say you're a racist.Β
just gave you my take on the word
I do appreciate all the feed back though much appreciated.Β