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Double Jeopardy

a little 7 5 7

Double Jeopardy

When you finish beating me
Why not relax and
Allow me to take over ..

 

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Gwendoline

Neville I sat looking at this and realised it can be read a couple of ways. At first I thought “oh you take a turn at beating them” but no this means taking a turn of beating up yourself...because sometimes we can do a better job at it...such a clever clever write x 

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Neville

Hey, that's just what this old fella wanted to hear .. bless you Gwen
I'm a bit like that/you .. I often have to re-visit before summat clicks .. I often think that certain poetry is a bit like those old magic eye images that can come alive from just a series of random dots ... x

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Gwendoline

Wow I remember those, my oldest friend loved having books of those pics. I always felt myself going cross eyed staring at them for ages đŸ€Șlol 

But yes I think that’s a great comparison. Some poems just need you to soak them in a while and then bang it hits you. Always an enjoyable moment...as was this poem to read 😊 x  

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Neville

it seems we are both write ... another win win shared Gwen .. thanks me lovely :) x

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