Poem -

DownFall

It was a downfall day
Where vulnerability took place
Where feelings claim to be what they are
Where care, love and the inner-self
Exposes itself to the universe
You can't fight it
All u have to do is hang in there
Be strong
Be your friend
And let it all pass

DownFall
Where everything breaks
For breakthrough
Where part of me
Wants to loosen up
Let be
And let silence cover me

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Christopher Correia

very cool tone to this write, Bridgette, a kind of planning and appreciation and coming to terms with who you are and what you want to be, great toned down clear articulation, crisp original honest writing....no forcing of a metaphor or unnecessary pretentious language, this is very good my friend, keep staying true to yourself, personality comes through....good work, I like it

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