Poem -
Dream
I wish I could sleep for a million years,
in a realm of no worries or fears.
I'd love to have fantastical dreams,
where everything's not quite as it seems.
My dream will be filled with light.
There'll be no darkness,
everything shiny and bright.
Crazy creatures roaming everywhere,
some of them with rainbow,polka dot hair.
In this world they leap and bound,
feet scarcely touching the ground.
Night sky so bright,amass with stars,
planets all visible, Jupiter and Mars.
As I stare up, gazing at Saturns rings
I dream my dream of magical things.
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Comments
Honorable Poetess Jenny Brewer,
Good write, my applause, my love, my five stars
The word “fantasy” is defined as the mind's eye which isn’t restricted by certainty, it is a situation imagined by a creator which doesn’t match up with the real world, but expresses certain aims or desires, involving scenes that are not possible under normal circumstances. Even though they create unreal representations of the world, poetic and mind generated metaphors and imaginary with fantasy themes are very attractive and can get to that extent where they actually influence some people’s lives.
You are having high poetic and imaginary and talents which need much more nurturing and watering by your artistic talents
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi Willy,
Once again,thank you so much for your comments.
Jenny x
Wondrous !
Hi Richard,
Thank you.
Jenny x
:) x
Hey Jenny!!..........One of my favorite subjects on this planet is Metaphysics...........this poem is a lovely tribute to those great dreamers that help move evolution forward positively!! (just my humble opinion of course)...........a lovely & noble dream sweet poetess!!............love your formatting and timing here.........well done.............T xo
Hey Tony,
Thank you so much for your comment,greatly appreciated.
Jenny x
Great Dream Jenny Love it...
sparrowsong
Hi Sparrowsong,
Thank you,.....
look out for my next poem,I'm actually writing one about being an insomniac,which I am. ( I nearly never dream,I barely sleep).....lol x
Jenny x