Poem -
Dreams Kiss Reality
I'm only a child
With dreams in my head
My dreams are so wild
They've left my bed
They've soared past towns
They've flown so high
I refuse to come down
I've made a home of the sky
But these are in my brain
These visions of flying
People find me insane
Some think I am dying
But I am well and fine
This becomes a formality
I dream, in all do time
When my dreams kiss reality
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Comments
Crimson King,
Good write, My five stars
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you
I really liked this Crimson, I could see this translated into a really short little film. Like a dark vision of The Snowman lol, with the young boy flying above the houses. An original and captivating little write. The end line I would have left the word 'will' out so it read 'My dreams kiss reality'. Much enjoyed Crimson, you get my vote:)
Thanks, I will probably change. It sounds better the way you put it.
Crimson. This is well written. I like the theme, and the idea of dreams having a life of their own. Well Done.
Thank you, much appreciated.