Poem -

*Drip*

*Drip*

An irritation's growing.
A drop of water flowing.
Doggedly more annoying.

*drip*

As ears strain for next drop.
Desperation for it to stop.
Peace of mind it's destroying.

*drip*

In soul-search, I found.
Source of a sound.
Sanguine verbose flood.

*drip*

Deceit keeps it ajar, pain grows.
Like leaky faucet, flows.
Try as I may, I can't silence blood

*drip*
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Ian William

Heart wrenching and a perfect unveiling of inner agony spewing out!

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Goode Benjamin

It has a very final feel to it. Sad, frustration and irritation. A mixture of thoughts dripping away. I could see this as a monologue on stage. A faucet placed on centre stage, and a ghostly voice over. Well written, definitely food for thought ??

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