Poem -
Earth Aflame
We built ย and developed
Our earth,
Although we failed for it
To be worth,
ย
From the development of communication,
To the development ofย
Our nation,
We persisted to remainย
the same,
Doomed to lose at our
own game,
We are to blameย
for our earth is aflame,
ย
Becauseย modern civilization
Is at its ย inevitable end
A faith we can just suspend.
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Comments
Hey BRI !!.....I really like theย succinct delivery of your phrasing here..... shining a light on some VERY important subject matter...... and bringing a unique twist to it!...... your formatting adds to the flow of the whole beautifully!!.....ALL STARS!!... well done... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ??โด??โด?
Thank you Tony, for your amazing comment, encouragement and warm welcome ??โบ๏ธ!!ย
And I love your poem โOrangeโ by the way. Its AMAZING! I would give it all stars but I donโt Know how to do that - could you tell me how and Iโll do itย
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Hi BRI !!...I sent you a private message that will help you..... any other questions feel free to message me back.....TTYL......T xo ??
amazing write. it is always an honor to read a talented poet!
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