Poem - 14 July 2018, 12:30

Earth Aflame

Bri❤️

We built and developed
Our earth,

Although we failed for it
To be worth,

From the development of communication,

To the development of
Our nation,

We persisted to remain
the same,

Doomed to lose at our
own game,

We are to blame
for our earth is aflame,

Because modern civilization
Is at its inevitable end
A faith we can just suspend.

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Destruction

Poetry Genre:

Drama

Topic:

SAVING OUR ENVIRONMENT

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Tony Taylor14 July 2018, 12:45

Hey BRI !!.....I really like the succinct delivery of your phrasing here..... shining a light on some VERY important subject matter...... and bringing a unique twist to it!...... your formatting adds to the flow of the whole beautifully!!.....ALL STARS!!... well done... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴??✴?

Bri❤️14 July 2018, 13:52

Thank you Tony, for your amazing comment, encouragement and warm welcome ??☺️!!

And I love your poem “Orange” by the way. Its AMAZING! I would give it all stars but I don’t Know how to do that - could you tell me how and I’ll do it
- I’m new?? and confused...

Tony Taylor14 July 2018, 15:09

Hi BRI !!...I sent you a private message that will help you..... any other questions feel free to message me back.....TTYL......T xo ??