Echoes

Echoes of my past
Shadows of old
My memories lambast
Leaving me cold
There was an age
When I was proud
And I could gauge
The world around
But now my mind
In pieces shattered
I can no longer find
What once mattered
And so I sink
Into a deep depression
And begin to drink
To seek suppression
Suppress my thoughts
Those troubling me
Demonic thoughts
I cannot free
So in the gloominess
A solitude form
A far-reaching bareness
My soul is torn
And so I try
To quell my pain
From the drink
I canât refrain
For only the drink
Changes me
So I canât think
And sets me freeÂ
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Great rhythm and momentum to this poem Peter, and some great lines, enjoyed!! A nomination for me :)
Thanks Rachel
Did you say a nomination Rachel?Â
Sorry Peter what I meant to say was in my opinion it is a nomination, you'll have to wait and see.  I thought it was a great write!  Sorry if I confused you :)
Yes, this is certainly a great write! Â You take the reader into a very tight space with you with each line. Â The emotions pour into each other until the glass is full. Â Well done!
val
Thank you so much Val
very nice congrats x
Thanks Susan