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Echoes

Echoes

Echoes of my past

Shadows of old

My memories lambast

Leaving me cold

There was an age

When I was proud

And I could gauge

The world around

But now my mind

In pieces shattered

I can no longer find

What once mattered

And so I sink

Into a deep depression

And begin to drink

To seek suppression

Suppress my thoughts

Those troubling me

Demonic thoughts

I cannot free

So in the gloominess

A solitude form

A far-reaching bareness

My soul is torn

And so I try

To quell my pain

From the drink

I can’t refrain

For only the drink

Changes me

So I can’t think

And sets me free 

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BLOSSOM

Great rhythm and momentum to this poem Peter, and some great lines, enjoyed!! A nomination for me :)

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BLOSSOM

Sorry Peter what I meant to say was in my opinion it is a nomination, you'll have to wait and see.  I thought it was a great write!  Sorry if I confused you :)

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Valerie Beasley...

Yes, this is certainly a great write!  You take the reader into a very tight space with you with each line.  The emotions pour into each other until the glass is full.  Well done!

val

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