Poem -
Effort
The world is sand and ocean,
We're caught in repetitive motion!
We try to rest on the hidden beach;
Waves of trials find us; and teach.
We escape to heights! ere stepping stone,
Ascending trial; creates muscle tone!
Simply whisper where you want to be,
Then include zealous life; being free!
Having cherished; freedom to choose!
Consequence endings; we'll never lose!
The mind can fly! or lock in place,
Soar to honor! or wallow in disgrace.
Do you not remember your first estate?
Past a critical test, this is not fate!
If we'll make effort; and choose the right!
Endure to the end, thus achieving flight!
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Comments
what great poem i love the line
we escape to heights ere stepping stoneĀ
thank you Greg! one day at a time bro!
InspiringĀ write Jim š
hi Marion! thank you for stopping by!
hi Lorris! thank you for reading!............................................................Jim
Wow my very talented wise man.Ā
Your efforts blow me away all the truth you comprehend.Ā
Keep the right outcome for someone so deserving.Ā
thank you Lilana my wonderful talented friend!
So true! Donāt waste existence. šš¼
thank you so much JP!
It is so true, no effort = no reward. Do nothing and you get nothing. Effort is crucial in living the best life you can. A fabulous write x
Honored Tina!
thank you Carol Anne my talented friend!
Jim, I loved this write, you gift the reader a sense of self empowerment. To remind us that we can control our outcome, through faith and actively seeking towards a better future. The wonders of life weave through your words beautifully. Pinned my wonderful poetic friendĀ
Gwen x
Awww Gwen! thank you so much for stopping by with your wonderful comments and support! I am always uplifted and honored by your efforts!
Jim magical stuff you have served up here and your life message is not lost or forgotten on this reader and dare I say, avid fan.
For you are one of a select group of social heartbeats on here, who really KNOWS how to put a true thinking message over and do it in such a way that is never heavy handed, never forced/ contrived and God forbid never lacklustre or boring.
Just class.
Pure class.
For what effort one puts in is what one takes out.
Which is an amicable reward in itself.
Keep writing Jim and I'll keep reading and back for more as the weeks progress.
Respect to you my friend and thank you for sharing.Ā
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love your comment and friendship Shaun! The respect and avid fan is right back at you!Ā I always look forward to your comments and writes that gives this place some class! your participation here is cherished!
Jim, a thousand apologies, I forgot to give honours first time round.
Bad puppy!
That has now been corrected now and this amnesic so so poet thanks you.
no worries Shaun!
Worth every one of them pins sir and here's to many more of em ..Ā