Poem -
Electric Flight
I'm on fire as i free myself from your grip
I am ...the butterfly who took her flight
with desire and passion...released like a volcano
Away from your drowning hand that pulled me
to the undercurrents of your black soul
I am...the freedom that fought your suffocating ways
Watch as the power of sacred soul departs
with a new-found peace and happiness
Your hand surrounded by your element water
will never bring me down
On fire ...with extreme power ...i take my flight
to my destiny ...to land in the hands of a suitor
who has air to help me breathe
You will drown in your own sorrow
While my electric flight begins...
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Hi again Tina.....had to read another.......I don't think there is too much to say to you.....you're incredibly talented.......that's obvious......I would like to say that I could feel a dark struggle in these words of breaking away.....I don't know if theirs a true story behind this.....but it felt very honest to me.....great write....tony xx
Thank you again Tony ....your quite right .At the time ...past history it was a struggle i stepped away from but in this and a lot of pieces i write my strength always wins :) I learned over years not to suppress what i have and writing sets it free for me .I can still write of them without feeling the pain now .Thank you my friend for your patience in reading .very much appreciated :) Tina x
Brilliant & breathtaking inspiring write sweetheart, love to you miss Tina Moore, nardine xoxo
"On fire ...with extreme power ...i take my flight
to my destiny ...to land in the hands of a suitor
who has air to help me breathe"