Poem -
EMOTIONALLY INSANE
Beautiful memories
Distorted with time
Bitterness took over
A once healthy mind
Poisoned thoughts
Now fill the void
Insecure curiosities
Always annoyed
Scars so deep
Cover the skin
Diagnosis impossible
Where to begin!
Wanting attention
Or seriously sick?
A full on allusion
Or a mental glitch?
Twisted sanity
Strangling the brain
Epiphany of darkness
Emotionally insane
Head full of sadness
Heart full of lies
Just a hypocrite
No matter how hard you try....
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Comments
An excellent, emotional verse, Thanks & Congrats
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI
That's very kind of you Williams, much appreciated :)
Thanks again Colleen :)
I agree with Williamsji Maveli Jason, my favourite stanza
Rolled off the tongue and the imagery was spot on!  You have a real grasp of this type of write Jason, the emotion you convey is real and relatable whilst still maintaining a great flow and rhyming scheme.  Always the entertainer, and now with your darker writes lol! Nicely written, a vote and nom from me:)x
Thanks very much Rachel, much appreciated X:)
Excellent Jason, very real
maddison
Cheers Maddison glad you enjoyed it :)
WELL DONE JASON ! I THOUGHT YOU,D WRITTEN THAT ABOUT ME UNTIL I GOT TO THE HYPERCITE BIT LOL! MY 007 POEM HAS JUST STRANGLED MY BRAINÂ
Cheers Tracy, i had you in mind lol, thanks :)
briliant Jason congrats x
Cheers Susan :)
Jason
Brilliant, intriguing...love the lines...
"Wanting attention
Or seriously sick?
A full on allusion
Or a mental glitch?"
I am studying psychology so this poem did it for me!! Big vote here mate! :)
jason
ive been gone a while man! I see you've changed your name! conrats on that!
the outlying confinements of insanity are a hoot!
ill be looking for ya!