Empty Arms!

Time's echoing a subconscious cry
out through the atoms hear the Cosmos sigh
Calling at tomorrows with lamenting plea
Listen for missing heart beats on a family tree
Where's the continuing of a newbie branch
arid from tears spilled on each unfulfilled chance
Exposure of raw nerves to near unbearable pain
binding links of a beginning lost hope chain
Though from the fire of every failed appealÂ
rises in the ashes a success chance to healÂ
Endurance swelling to the ongoing plight
surely soon to beat the long term bad luck blight
To an higher order is the ask this time
winding the clock of creation to chime
Empty arms to the Stars out stretch
hoping the answer is a miracle and a new life fetch

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Comments
Hi WENDY!!...... you have a fine sense of control over your medium...... your use of alliteration in the very first line shines brightly!!... your ability to convey pain in such a unique manner is on display beautifully here........I have a disease that causes extreme chronic pain myself....... so trust me when I say......I can TOTALLY relate to this piece!! .......ALL STARS!!  & PINNED!!...... well done dear poet sister!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo
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Thankyou Tony  I always appreciate your comments. This poem is about hoping for a child but it not happening. I have been there ,y self many years ago but now have two grown up sons. One is hoping for children but as yet not been successful .
Just posted my latest poem to notice that yours had a similar title...lol. We must be on a like wavelength tonight.Â
Lol seem like it ?
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