Poem -
Empty man
Nothing really matteredĀ
It all just went at onceĀ
Nothing to show forĀ
Emptied of hopeĀ
An artificial dealingĀ
About to fucking chokeĀ
Surrender to winĀ
Sender returned from sinĀ
You cannot looseĀ
You either learn or winĀ
I can see it on youĀ
That smirky grinĀ
Nothing left not even a tearĀ
Emptied outĀ
All the blame and fearĀ
Itās all on usĀ
Is what you sayĀ
Itās what I hearĀ
Nothing leftĀ
Even the pathway is clear
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Comments
Hello Thomas...
You shouldn't have to wait too long...
āāāāāāSomeone's got to have Cookies and Milk...
It's probably not even a strange request anymore...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
When things get strange I try to be strangerĀ
Can feel emptinessĀ bitterness and hopelessness in this. Good write x
Thank you for your observations. Much appreciated.
Reminds me of my younger years as a poet on here, you've got me intrigued TC, may check out some more of your work now~
Thank you for your comment I hope you enjoy my writing as much as I have yours šš
You can writeĀ
Positive things
Don'tĀ giveĀ losers
time or
poetry
'
Iāll do whatever the fuck I like šĀ