Poem -
The End.
Of leaving this mortal plain I have no fear
Mostly I've enjoyed my experiences here
There is so much I have seen and done
But I know there's so much more to come
This life teaches us all in numerous ways
Ready for another journey after our days
Sceptics may never understand this belief
They'll have an Almighty shock once deceased !!!
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Hello Richard...
I was just speaking with a family member about this same subject...
Very Bazaar!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
:)
sparrowsong
:) Thanks for commenting !
Take care.
My God I Love you!!........it's like you sometimes write my heart down for me.............this is SO good my friend.........in SO many ways I can only say............Thank You Brother!!.............smiles............T xo
:) Thanks for the support and kind words !
Profound subtle intelligence Richard, you're a very smart man who knows how to capture the essence of a complex scenario....I'm scratching my head trying to figure out how you managed to write poem about death, that leaves the reader with optimism...all to say is, brilliant; I love it when I can't easily dissect...have great evening, and thank you for posting this...
Thank you for appreciating the effort I put into this write ! Best wishes my friend !
Richard definitely an amazing write, and the first line says so much about you a humble good hearted soul with no fear of death. I would like to be at your level on this thought but at this time in my life I can not think for myself but only for others. A great write well done.
In this life it is so important to think of others and help others ! You help others and you help yourself ! I am so glad you consider how you can contribute to creating a more caring world through your actions. If all put others first, as you do, some things would change. Respect to you.
How we prepare for our end is a personal journey. All, of a certain age, have to be prepared in some way for we are just mortal with death an always present possibility !!!
Best wishes to you ! :)
Hi Richard. If you have faith in God the journey to the other side will be filled with happiness and no more tears. No more pain . Just splendor that will last a lifetime. Cheers :)hrl
Thank you for such an explanation of faith. You put it so eloquently my friend. Belief is key to making the most of this life and being ready for its end.
Your support is much appreciated and your words always mean a lot !
Best wishes.
We have death present from our first second of reason without knowing in reality where it takes us. We are born, we live, we suffer, we enjoy and we feel joy for life, no fear of death when it dies with the quiet heart and hands full of nobility, death is a narrow door that opens at the same time that another large door closes.
Is Death a Reality and Life a Chimera?
Death is not a point and end, that is obvious, a or otherwise vital essence is eternal, but despite that life is very beautiful and have to rush her to the second end, death is certain and towards life, it is always preferable to make her wait.
A greeting.
Thank you so much for your appraisal and for raising interesting questions about our existence and its end.
Your analysis is always welcome !
Best wishes to you.
We must look back to assess and to understand the present, looking back you can avoid committing the same mistakes in the future.
Greetings, I love the way that you look at and mention poetry.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my work. Thank you for the support.
It is gratifying to know that my efforts you find worthwhile and you appreciate what I try to achieve in my poems.
Thank you for being there. Best wishes to you !