ENOUGH IS ENOUGH

When I walked out your life
Knew it had to be done
My dreams they were shattered
All hope it was gone
No longer I wanted
What you had to give
Fighting and hating
Not a love that should live
Let it burn with the rest
Of my memories to you
Regrets and remorse
Is all that we knew
No joy anymore
No happiness we shared
Destructive; despairing
Not one of us cared
Enough to prevent it
Enough to say “hey!”
“If we keep on like this
It’ll end in tears one day!”
But the rows they went on
The exclamations of blame
The reasons for hating
Became a sad game!
Not one of us noticed
How the other was hurt
Needed a shoulder
Not recriminations, so curt!
We longed for the closeness
We longed to behold
The beauty of love’s light
Not sat out in the cold
The frost it was nippy
Would bite at my skin
Your actions were bitter
Never once let me in
But I too, was not perfect
Your ways they would chafe
Rub me the wrong way
You always played safe
I tried to be part
Of your life in a way
But always knew time out
Would happen one day!
We’d met with excitement
The lust was immense
But now the flames flickered
No longer intense
The fun was left wanting
And so was our life
So I took all my belongings
Left you with your wife!!!
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loved that Rachel x
Thanks hun and thanks for reading :)
This piece really brings back memories for me.  I think I was temporarily in denial…I knew eventually I have to leave him with his wife.  Excellent write!
val
Thanks Val, hope he got his due lol!! Â Thanks for reading hun :)
Fantastic write Rachel, anybody that messes about with married men deserves an unhappy ending :)
And any married man that messes with a woman other than his wife deserves to be unhappy lol!!!  Thanks for reading Jason :)
all being said great write Rachel x
Cheers Susan :)
Rachel this was a healthy cathartic read!
I like the flow and rhyme keeping aÂ
poignant message for the reader until the
 punch line and what a punch lineÂ
you set before us, in sum a well thoughtÂ
Through poem with high relevance,
thank you for writing what I considerÂ
a poem with a conscience; great pic too!
best wishesÂ
Jai :)Â
Thanks Jai for your kind comments, glad you liked the pic!! :)
great write was not expecting the ending brill!!
great flow through it all
fab poem
Thanks Sandra for reading and your kind comments, pleased you liked the poem :)
Thanks Lily Mae, appreciate your comments :)
A sad write Rachel with an unexpecting end. Â Wonderfully written and expressed. :)
Thanks Poppy for your kind comments and for reading, it is much appreciated! :)