Evil Within

Creepy instills upon this old house on the hillĀ
Sounds of demons lurking emanate beyond the paleĀ
Murder took place here a long time agoĀ
Leaving a permanent scar from the attic to basement belowĀ
It has been rented by dozens of tenants In the pastĀ
None lasting more than week because of the ghostly conditions ,nothing meant to lastĀ
Things manifest to look like your friend ,turn your back it could be the endĀ
Deep down evil burns on a reoccurring scaleĀ
This house opened a gateway to hell my dearest friendĀ
To enter without God you will meet a terrible fateĀ
Better hurry and get out before it is too late
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Cool stuff ROCK!!...... and it's been proven by dozens of films that this subject matter is just compelling as hell.......I like the way you the way you used "The scar from the attic to the basement below..".......... that would make a person not sign the rental agreement.......... smiles......... well done bro!!........T xo
Hey t thanks . This was a easy write for me like passion writes are for cherie or metaphysical writes to you . Glad you enjoyed, I had fun writing it. Cheers bro glad you thought it was cool . Rock
Great write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
Hey willy thanks always glad to see you on my page . Hugs to you rockĀ
Hi Rock.....Well done for a superb piece, well written and well thought through honey. I love the picture and I would love to visit that house, I find ghost stories fascinating. This piece showcases your talent perfectly and it`s an enjoyable read. Well done.
G xx
Hey Georgina. Thanks for your kind words .I have always been fascinated by tales of ghosts and things that go bump in the night .glad you enjoyed .I love doing dark writes ,you can have some much fun with them . Hugs and love rockĀ
I can picture Boris Karloff reading your poem. Ā Great eerie tale.Ā
Hey Shirley thanks ,he could make sound really creepy . Cheers to you rockĀ