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Evil Within

Evil Within

Creepy instills upon this old house on the hillĀ 

Sounds of demons lurking emanate beyond the paleĀ 

Murder took place here a long time agoĀ 

Leaving a permanent scar from the attic to basement belowĀ 

It has been rented by dozens of tenants In the pastĀ 

None lasting more than week because of the ghostly conditions ,nothing meant to lastĀ 

Things manifest to look like your friend ,turn your back it could be the endĀ 

Deep down evil burns on a reoccurring scaleĀ 

This house opened a gateway to hell my dearest friendĀ 

To enter without God you will meet a terrible fateĀ 

Better hurry and get out before it is too late

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Tony Taylor

Cool stuff ROCK!!...... and it's been proven by dozens of films that this subject matter is just compelling as hell.......I like the way you the way you used "The scar from the attic to the basement below..".......... that would make a person not sign the rental agreement.......... smiles......... well done bro!!........T xo

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Bradford

Hey t thanks . This was a easy write for me like passion writes are for cherie or metaphysical writes to you . Glad you enjoyed, I had fun writing it. Cheers bro glad you thought it was cool . Rock

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Bradford

Hey willy thanks always glad to see you on my page . Hugs to you rockĀ 

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Georgina Richardson

Hi Rock.....Well done for a superb piece, well written and well thought through honey. I love the picture and I would love to visit that house, I find ghost stories fascinating. This piece showcases your talent perfectly and it`s an enjoyable read. Well done.

G xx

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Bradford

Hey Georgina. Thanks for your kind words .I have always been fascinated by tales of ghosts and things that go bump in the night .glad you enjoyed .I love doing dark writes ,you can have some much fun with them . Hugs and love rockĀ 

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Shirley Rebstock

I can picture Boris Karloff reading your poem. Ā Great eerie tale.Ā 

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Bradford

Hey Shirley thanks ,he could make sound really creepy . Cheers to you rockĀ 

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