Poem -
Existence
On the brink of existence
Where consciousness meets thought
To scatter in matter
All light that is caught
As it breeds
To conceive
On the cusp of a wave
Time bleeds the pulse
The propulsion to pave
To attain
In every spasm
Every atom
That seeds
To breath out the knowledge
That longs to be freed
On the brink
On the edge
On the ledge of pure life
Where dualities found
Amidst the dark
and the light
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Comments
Good job Gwen. I really enjoyed it. I find many similarities with my style of writing on this topic. The words paint images that lead us to the origin of the universe and the primordial atom, space-time, light and darkness in convulsion while playing the first chords of the long symphony of existence...
VT12
Hello VT12, thanks for the wonderful comment on this poem. So glad you could connect to the piece. I have a number of poems that stem around this theme. Also some art attached to some. So pleased you read this one today
Gwen x
wow great poem
Greg, thanks my friend for reading, for your kindness and your pin x
"To breath out the knowledge
That longs to be freed"
Perfectly said, this hit home for me....
So true and you conveyed it well throughout the write.
Rob, many thanks, that means a lot. So grateful to read your thoughts on this poem x
Hello GWENDOLINE!!....this is such a powerful expression of your vision of the Birth of life into this reality.....I think VT12 said it well.....and like him...we all, who dare to ponder this subject matter, come to similar conclusions.....but I have to say that your 'poetic expression' of this is superb....it reads aloud with an elegance and inherent wisdom that sends a shiver down my spine!!.....BEAUTIFULLY crafted!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....as I read it through the second time i could see this as an expression of the "Big Bang" itself!!.....Bravo!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow Tony, you delved deep my friend. I am so glad you did. For you never disappoint with your wonderful ability to connect to my work in fabulous ways. Ever grateful and ever admiring your own thoughts on this subject
Gwen x
Hello Gwen...
I read this over a few times...
So Amazing!!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Sparrowsong, I am thrilled you liked this so much, you read it a few times :) made my day. Many thanks for such kindness towards this poem. So pleased you enjoyed
Gwen x
... this is awesome & no kidding .. and look, seriously .. I even spelt kidding write :) x
:) Neville, thanks my wonderful friend for these words are a gem to receive indeed x
Hey Gwen ..
just wanted to let you know, I think I went to somewhere quite near to the image you posted up there last night .. it was after a rather stressful evening on call and about an hour after retiring & quite unintentional .................................. but keep it to yourself or they might come round n lock me up ................................................. x
Wow Neville I do hope the experience was pleasant my friend. I love hanging out in the cosmos...they would have to lock me up too 😊 x
quite a unique poem really enjoyed reading this one
Thanks Linda for reading this one and your kind words x
My kind of write. Great work!
Thanks so much JP, always means a lot when you leave your feedback. So glad you liked this one. Sorry for late reply x
Completely stunning and deep write Gwen...a topic that is always on my mind this...what a write...so beautifully done...hugs Xx
Thanks my friend, yes I spend way too much time musing over this sort of thing :) so glad you liked this poem. Sorry for late reply xx
Absolutely, bloody brilliant. Talking of stars, which your poem does most poetically, I want to award you a Universe full for this excellent poem xx
Wow Tina, many thanks for such a sparkling review :) so very pleased you enjoyed this one xx
What magic in poetry. On fire would be an understatement, I have a lump in my throat from missing the party on this one. Breath taking Gwen. And I`m not just saying that~
Hi Max, thanks ever so much for reading this one my friend. I have been late to many good parties, it is lovely to find your feedback here today. Thanks so much and I hope all is well x
My Dear Gwen,
HEAVY! HEAVY! HEAVY!
You have taken your readers to the seeds of their existence!
All my love,
Larry xxx
Wow thank you Larry for this stellar response to this poem. I am so happy you felt it’s impact :)
Gwen x
awesome Gwen!....................................................................Jim
Wow Jim thank you so very much for looking at my latest posts. So grateful for your time and wonderful words
Gwen x