Eye Listened
Eye Listened
The times you thought my ears were closed,
i listened with my eyes.
The many times i approached you not,
they captured all your cries.
Your heart once knew my love so true,
though doubt replaces now serienity.
A test of time,a love left behind,
no longer are you into me.
The flowers i gave, our love not they saved,
withered, though love remained.
You slowly slipped away, no words did you say,
my love to you i proclaimed.
I watched you let go,the hurt you'll never know,
and the pain i felt inside.
Your shoulder so cold, you delivered so bold,
methodically for this, i now hide.
A voice with no speech, a lesson you now teach,
I've felled, with colors, that fly.
Your love i have lost and the price it has cost,
supercede my reasons to cry.
So now, that you've gone and i left alone,
to ponder the release of your hand.
A heart broken man, a face thrown in it sand,
eyes closed, like your ears, i still stand.
jim
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Very nice shot. It's funny.
Thanks a bundle Svetlana....The little guys eyes, appears to be in "full bloom" chaos..... I too felt a little humor in his demeanor.
Warmest regards,
Jim
who is this cat? Why is this happening?
where is the love gone, the warmth?
I am left with more questions than answers
and a very cute kitty!
Nice one Jimmy:) Jai
Thanks Jai and extremely sorry for the late response...Was kinda in anther world there for a moment,(family health issues)...Thanks for the comment and that is kinda what the cat felt about the owner in this one...Love the perception..
where is the love gone, the warmth?
I am left with more questions than answers
Regards,
Jim
Sir Jim Arnold Jim Sir,
An Excellent verse, further a thought provoking lines, My applause to you Sir, Thanks for sharing. I love your below lines.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Love your title and the two opening lines Jim, very profound and almost a poem all on their own. Love is a funny old thing; when it's good and mutual there truly is nothing better. When 'Love' comes to break your heart it sure is soul destroying. You expressed the isolation, confusion and despair very well Jim. A lovely write. Not sure about the image that goes with this, for me takes away from your poem. I would change it or just remove it. Your words speak enough:)