Poem -

Eyjafjallajökull

Eyjafjallajökull

I don’t squirm
a column

you’re red
a volcano in love with the sun.

 

Like 1 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
The fish of the sea

I always enjoy reading your work, Herve! Love your beautiful and deep meaning behind the lines. Nice to see you back! (Please excuse your name, my laptop keyboard doesn't want to play this morning). Really loved this one.

Reply
author
Hervé Deleu

Thx. I wonder if the contest has changed? I asked Cosmo but they did't respond. Since sept 2020 I see no nominations or winners. Maybe you know why? (I love your poetry more than mine...)

Reply
author
The fish of the sea

Ahh, sorry! For some reason, I didnt see you reply... but yes, I have been talking to the VIPs (most experienced members of the Cosmos) about this recently... no one seems to know what's going on.  That's why I recently submitted work in a competion outside of Comsos because of it. If you would like me to send you to some for some poetry competitions I'll be more than happy to. Really, it's too kind of you to say that about my poetry, to be honest, I think I have a lot to learn from awesome poets, such as yourself. Hope this helps, please call me Max~ 

Reply
author
Hervé Deleu

Hi Max. I am allways honest in my criticism. So, if I admire your poetry, I do. 
I am member of jury's in my country, i can see the differance.
And yes, send me to other poetry competitions around the world. 
Hervé.

Reply
Poem -

Conjunction

Conjunction

Down-to-earth sobriety.

Come back to bed. Seen anything?
If I see them, they'll see me too....

Poem -

The love that doesn't...

Spiritual love

The love that doesn't live

The love that doesn't live.

The love that lives not in skin and voice, but in thoughts, silent and...

Poem -

The cold of loss

The cold of loss

The cold of loss.

My naked words hold nothing
only the shiver of meaning
in the cold...

Latest poems in Erotic

Poem -

No exit allows egress...

No exit allows egress...

forever dooming how the missus and I relate
where interplay, foreplay and coldplay
insinuated...

Poem -

Quiet Noise

Quiet Noise

Talking words like a poet's pen,
Writing, writing where to begin.

Thoughts break into...

Poem -

I possess an unusual knack...

I possess an unusual knack for making women bristle

hence immediately this birdman
wishes to escape into his eyrie
or seriously considers joining...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com