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Eyjafjallajökull

Eyjafjallajökull

I don’t squirm
a column

you’re red
a volcano in love with the sun.

 

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The fish of the sea

I always enjoy reading your work, Herve! Love your beautiful and deep meaning behind the lines. Nice to see you back! (Please excuse your name, my laptop keyboard doesn't want to play this morning). Really loved this one.

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Hervé Deleu

Thx. I wonder if the contest has changed? I asked Cosmo but they did't respond. Since sept 2020 I see no nominations or winners. Maybe you know why? (I love your poetry more than mine...)

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The fish of the sea

Ahh, sorry! For some reason, I didnt see you reply... but yes, I have been talking to the VIPs (most experienced members of the Cosmos) about this recently... no one seems to know what's going on.  That's why I recently submitted work in a competion outside of Comsos because of it. If you would like me to send you to some for some poetry competitions I'll be more than happy to. Really, it's too kind of you to say that about my poetry, to be honest, I think I have a lot to learn from awesome poets, such as yourself. Hope this helps, please call me Max~ 

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Hervé Deleu

Hi Max. I am allways honest in my criticism. So, if I admire your poetry, I do. 
I am member of jury's in my country, i can see the differance.
And yes, send me to other poetry competitions around the world. 
Hervé.

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