Faded dreams and misery

Hi Morris, love the poem, and this line {The truth went and lied…..to me)  My God it drove me crazy, so much meaning hidden in it.

Keep writing, PLEASE.

Yes Morris, this is what happens when God blesses a poets pen.,

Once again my soul begins to roam in the world of P B Shelley having observed the contents of your remarkable composition 'Faded dreams and misery'. Thanks for sharing the poem.

Ravindra Kumar

Brother Morris,

      Either this is what you've always been- OR your power is growing. Now, I bow down and applaud you. In your words... "Good shit!!!" LOL!

                                                                                                         James Whaley

Great poem Morris. It's a beautiful story too. I also write the poem and keep going, then title it. Powerful message. 

What's up Morris,

Sometimes partner we must say good bye to our past instead, and as much as we would love for it to be,not all things can be conquer, but they at some point can be contained,at least until we have found that alternative route, around the origin of its existence. Sometimes we are only as sick as our secrets allow us to be but for every ailment, lies a cure, we just haven't been privileged and humbled enough, through God, to be entrusted with its, (simple to him,yet a mystery to mankind) recipe.We are who we are, for a reason, trials and tribulations are part of our testimonial makeup but to him it's our test in time...He hadn't turned his back on you, he just wonna see whether you are gonna run and hide, or battle back your demons in submission, as he once did for you, while he takes that needed break you allowed him, with your in-site triumph, over all that afflicted you, while he sits back for that one moment to recline, that you gave him. He hear you player, he's amazed at what you do and it aint done for the fun, its done, because it has to be done and its your time to shine......Like the two lines below..  

Later,

Jim

My sins went and turned their back on me,
The truth went and lied…..to me.

Absolutely perfect!

Congratulations on the "7" nominations, all of them well deserved.........

Later,

Jim

This is very profound Morriss...cut right to the heart... Best Wishes... Liz.

morris i must be learning something from you because i love reading your poems but don,t know how to give you feedback,you are a deep thinking poet,i don't title my poems until i finish does that make me a bit of a deep thinker too would love your feedback on that hope you don't take what i have said negative as i said i'm learning

Your poetry touches my heart and inspires me, so i guess i should be saying thx:)

just wonderful

I love it, congrats :)