Poem -
fairytales.
Fairytales
You are theĀ kind of person,
i wish for in my dreams,
Where princes and princesses,
become kings and queens,
Where reality is non existant,
and anger is so distant,
Where birds are always singing,
and bells and chimes are ringing,
Where laughter is all around us,
and smiling faces surround us,
Where love it lasts forever,
and you will feel pain never,
A fantasy, Ā a dream,
Where i will be your queen.
Ā
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Comments
Hey VANESSA!!...... this is so easy to relate to..... makes for a compelling read...... some of the phrases are truly magical just as your title might imply!!......I DO think that if you broke your lines differently this would be even MORE powerful!! (no offense intended sister poet)......ALL STARS!!...... much enjoyed!!..... and in case no ne has said so...... WELCOME to COSMO!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ā³ā“ā
Hi there, i had it sectioned In verses so it was the way it was meant to be. When i save and share it puts itself back and leaves massive spaces. I had to re edit alot on my last poem as the gaps were humungus. It was hard to read. It took an hr to get rid of them. haha. i will try and re edit this one. I had no issue on my first poem. The last 2 were difficult just being able to read them. There were gaps in the middle of scentences. It looked like a swimming lane with people cheering either side. I will retry as it Must be annoying not having them read line at a time. Thanking you.Ā
Thank you for the welcoming. I have fixed it up. I cut one of them short yesterday as it is such a hassle to get them into sentences. They looked fine then i would press save and the tsunami stuff happened. It's difficult as all my internet access is on my phone. Have a lovely day.