Poem -
Fallen
- head over heels
By Yiyan Han (c) 2016-01-02, minor modification on 2020-11-23
When you're fallen
Wish your head is still up
βnβ keep cool
But you wouldn't
'cause you're crazy
head over heels
Wish one day
You wake up βnβ ask yourself
Where I've been
What I've done
You're blindfolded
'cause you're fallen
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Comments
Lovely lines Yi Yan. Gan Bie!Β
You are a mystery woman, Cleo! That should be "gan bei", and for those who don't understand, simply means "Cheers" while you enjoy wines, or βBottoms upβ ;))
Love your poem Yiyan...love your comment to Cherie also...I hold two walking sticks...great write π
"two walking sticks"? Marion! Think your heart is a wild teenager's - more saucy sweat dreams? ;))
No Yiyan lol...I love how you misunderstand everything lol...it's so sweet. I meant I have two.walking sticks to hold me up...STOP me falling in love...lol...I no longer believe. You make me laugh..lol..
Don't you think I don't understand what you said "two walking sticks". I jokingly replied and wanted to say you appear young (hence withΒ a wild teenager's heart). Keep smiling ;)
Ha ha...I see, you still.mske me laugh though Yiyan I love your bluntness...hugs π
https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/simple-man-191391
This is a simple man who writes/speaks in a straight way with a reasonably sharp edge, usually not rude though -- modified "bluntness" ;))