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fanisy love

you say we're over because of a fatful set back.

you tore up the clover because you think thats, that. 

though we agree'd it wasn't real, I feel so revealed.

though you say you have personal issues, you just can't show how you feel.

isn't that what realation ships are for, to share your feelings?

even if its fantisy, we can get through lots of unthrillings.

on the out side I look fine, but my mind is wondering with thoughts.

thoughts that I can't tell you because your not being real with me.

I don't care if your reading this and shaking your head.

this fantisy brake up will leave me feeling dead.

I'm glad I don't know you in real life, I'm glad you cared once.

I'm glad you make me feel like a really huge dunce.

so what if its fantisy, so what if we didn't get far.

this is exactly what I was telling you when we were telling each other who we are.

o.k. I"m done, this rap is making me want to run.

but before I stop, look at your self, we could of had lots of fun.

( this is a fantisy)

R.M. 

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Jimmy Arnold

What's up James??

Truth as always, Up front and personal, never  to be eluded by you and A suit well tailored to fit indeed,  and it is worn only by you,...I like the way played with this one James, especially this set of lines....

so what if its fantasy, so what if we didn't get far.

this is exactly what I was telling you ,when we were telling each other, who we are.

Take Care Partner,

Jim

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Jimmy Arnold

You to man, still hoping to hear you say, its on once more, i'll be the first to buy a ticket...

Stay cool,

Jim 

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Russel James Mackie

don't bother buying a ticket, you, shirley, ravindra, and shah will get back stage tickets. no dought about it. 

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Jimmy Arnold

you are a good man,and i really hope it happens for you will be your loudest screaming fans.....Thanks  a million, (R.J.M.).

Stay you man,

Jimmy 

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