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FATE OR DESTINY

FATE OR DESTINY

Is our life predestined?or is it all down to fate?
If it`s all mapped out,surly there`d be only love,not hate?

We live our lives the best we can, showing care to all
Trying to help one another in life, however big or small

I wonder why there`s suffering?and some of us die young?
Was this a plan for us? as its been like this since time has began

I think fate plays a part in life, but destiny has its place.
Because there are many different cultures, in our human race

I think some things were destined, one being to love our fellow man
Another was to not  fight in wars,surly! that must have been a plan

Some made their our own destiny, being the despots who brought war
That was mad men`s own doing though, that was surly not  foresaw!

I think when god created our earth and us,, he envisaged peace and love
So he destined harmony!! It was up to man, To take heed from him, our God above

 

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!.......I love the subject matter you choose to write on!!....... I'm with you here.........I do think that God has put us here to overcome......... to go beyond war and hatred......... and writing is one of the ways for sure........ this is one of those type writes......... reminds you of the one truth........... well done my friend...........ALL STARS.......... hugs-n-smiles..........T xo

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony Glad you liked the topic i am for ever questioning ~
things, its my nature always has been As i said to Cherie 
god guides us through all aspects of life, all we have to do is
listen thank you  for reading.. hugs Debs xo

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Larry Ran

Hi Debs,

Yes, sweetie, I have gone there many times.  If it's all our destiny, as you say, how come there is so much evil?  One answer, Satan has his hand on Fate, the balance between good and evil.  I think God trusted Lucifer, but was betrayed by him.  Unfortunately, the evil that men do lives on, the good is oft interred with their bones.  Nice deep thoughts, Debs.  I enjoyed it.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry 
great comments on this one Thank you so much 
love and hugs Debs xo

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Georgina Richardson

I really enjoyed this piece as it asks the same questions that I`m always thinking about! This is a great subject for discussion sweetie and you`ve written it beautifully, well done. A superbly well thought out piece.

God bless

G xx

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Deborah Evans

I am so glad you liked this one G  i am always questioning 
everything thanks so much for your support in my writes
means so much to me Love Debs xx

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