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Faust

Faust

β€˜Oh despair, oh I loathe in waiting,
Teach me wonders before forsaking.
Show me height and unbeknown to me,
I wilt in whimper my life bestowed on me.’

Β β€˜Come hear my plea, renounce what you know and ascend with me.Β  Are you worthy of such a gift? Turn your back on sun and deride in its rift.Β  Β Ride with me to plains beyond threshold, that man dare not dream, I’ll show you, behold!’

β€˜What must I give for such knowledge and realm?Β  What price must I pay for depths in which we delve?’

β€˜Don’t worry of such matters, it is all in hand.Β  When your done roaming, exploring, you’ll come take my hand.Β  Be free, make your decision, a life time of jewels for your mere extinction.Β  What do you care when your nothing but bones and dust, live your life now, show no remorse!’

β€˜I accept such an offer, on broad shoulders I fly, teach me oh brother until I must die’.Β 
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Simon Bromley

Thank you poetess but I'm really not sure where I am going wrong.Β  Think I need to take a break and reflect on what I am writing.Β  Its really frustrating, if people are not liking my material then please tell me why or give advice. Β 

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Simon Bromley

Thank you!Β  That means a lot.Β  You're right I do comment on stuff all the time but it drives me insane sometimes where I think what is the point.Β  Maybe other people think like this too?Β  Truth is I cant top writing, I love it so as much as my reviews are getting less I will stay and keep trying.Β  Thank you for being such a fan.

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