Poem -
Fear
My fear of failure,
His failure to feel.
Where do we go from here?
Last night he cried on my chest and told me his heart was frozen.
I froze, lost and confused in his contradictions.
Where do we go from here?
My heart is full of him
And he is full of fear.
Comments
Simply beautiful! ☺
Thank you John!
Cheers Lisa;
-so much beautifully said in so few words, each personal expression is demonstratively and definitively described in such a way that the reader feels for the protagonist and the conflict that they're involved in.
-Thanks for sharing these and take care and have a good one.
Alex
PS : welcome to Cosmo
Well written. I enjoyed reading this.
A quandary many of us have felt.
John
Nowhere to go other than up from where you currently find yourself in this relationship, Lisa.
At least one would tend to think so.
Mice...
~Dean Kuch 💔
Sorry, Lisa. I meant to type "Nice", not "Mice."
Oops❣️
Haha no problem Dean! Thank you so much for your comments, I appreciate them a lot xoxo
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Thanks everyone for your kind comments ❤️