Poem -
FEAR WITH THE DARK
lying alone,dark is the night
dark my thought's
dark my life
embrace my fear
call it near
nurture and love it
share my tear's
wait for the light
shine through the room
gone is my fear
gone is my tomb
vision an angel from now in the dark
bringing me love not fear in my heart
goodbye my old friend
you helped me "not much"
light is my new love
I WON'T KEEP IN TOUCH
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hi Tina very nice write turning your back on the dark and facing the light inspiring much enjoyed x
thank's susan guess we all have that feeling at some time tina
thank's shah,i think a lot of poem's have two different meaning's behind them.you definately got one meaning thank you best wish's tina
thank you angel best wish's tina
love this so much it talks to me
I really like this, it is deep and very interesting, I like the end, "I won't keep in touch"
kinda humerous but very clever.
Your work is very appealing.
Keep writing.
Nancy
ALL I AM GONNA SAY IS "GOOOOOOD SHIT" THIS IS POETRY THAT I WANT TO HEAR YOU PERFORM... I STAND WITH APPLAUSE ON THIS GREAT PIECE, KEEP THEM COMING!! LOVED IT. IT'S GOING INTO THE FAVORITE FILE!
Amazing,love it! congrats
Wow... Tina...
Great Peom... I love your word play
tina i really do like this poem i favorited it i feel its very good and everybody likes it
than you jason im glad you read and like it best wishs tina
sorry jacob meant to say that tina
best piece of mine on this site methinks :)