Feeling Hidden Undefined
I’m carrying feelings that don’t belong with my individual spirit
Flowing like temptation, they rule my presentable professional self
Of me being…true, from within I’m real
False alarm I reject the true that lies in my eyes
But I carry a golden further
Covering my expectations as human
I live to smile but my soul weeps with never revealed True feeling
I live, I carry, I walk shortly
Talk slowly but yet I smile
Brightness of my vision folded by passion
Yet I can’t define but the feeling be carried
It all reflects as my behalf I have placed.
Borrowed my heart. Switched speech of living
Withdrew my steps in focus
Renewed conditions in living
Fraud for false alarm
I tip toes in a never ending corner
I therefore surrender, let the feeling carry
My unknown shadow once known but now crashed
Who you be?....
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If you'll allow me to be honest for a sec, I have to say that as I child there was always a piece of poetry or art or play with a deep profound message imbued within it, though no matter how hard I tried I could never understand it or discover that message though I could always tell just how deep it was. Today I've felt once again that ever so nostalgic familiarity and still lack the means of piecing together the puzzle..But I can tell that in some way shape or form this is immensely deep, great write, I'll keep trying though, cheers :) I've said this all once before too it's funny that I repeat myself
This was a great write though
Much love, CO
Hello Curious, I hope you well. I been trying to reply to you but often get disturbed or try at work and still get disturbed to finish explain what this was about. :-) I feel and understand where you coming from. And I have been there.
In short to explain. This was about a woman who was denying what she was feeling from her previous relation. She eventually spoke to the feeling within silently. The feeling that was hunting her was about the strong connection she shared with her partner she still was crazy in love with. She was working when she had a moment where she felt like she was in that man's shoes and feelings of the man spoke to her. She was denying all that she felt from the connection and feelings for him till she felt cornered and had to surrender that she still loves him.
Bridgette, such unique and intoxicating syntax; your relationship with words is sweet and a pure joy to read, it is a poem that made me smile, very uplifting and most of all interesting to read, to be honest I didn't understand all of the narrative, but nonetheless loved the essence and tone of this write; so well crafted....cheers, you have a great talent
Hello Chris, lol it's one of those secret poems, I'm kidding. But I understand what you mean. Funny most people liked it, now it makes me wonder if they understood what it was about...lol. Please read up to my Curious's respond. It was about a woman who was denying what she was feeling inside and still could not get why she felt that way and if its true that she had a very powerful strong connection with someone she was with at her previous relationship. The connection they shared.
Thank you for reading :-)