Feeling Misunderstood
Looking for her love as the light dims across the forest floor
He disappeared without a trace no sound ,no whisper in this cruel, cruel world
Struggling to find hope alive ,meanwhile dying inside
Searching near ,searching far,just wondering where you are
He promised to love her with that pinky finger extended out
Tears feel her eyes of life tormented in broken promises and dreams
His heart felt her love ever shining so bright
She turned her head he was gone no evidence could be found
Stuck pondering her sublime existence from a misunderstood upbringing feeling lost in the woods
With lamp her lamp held high roaming in the dead of night ,hoping soon her love will return to transform her miserable plight at first light
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Hey ROCK!!........ It's amazing how well you bring your pictures to life......... and like Cherie said........ from a woman's point of view is mind boggling........ don't think I could do that brother.......... keep 'em coming...... your syntax is getting better and better..........ALL STARS......... well done.........T xo
Nice work !!! Great style to this thoughtful piece !
Best wishes to you !
:)
Hey Richard thanks I enjoy these writes and I have fun writing from a woman's point of view . Thanks for sweet comments. Cheers. Rock
Thank you ! :)
Take care.
She's left in a lovelorn stupor but not to the point of hopelessness. Very well done. The words animate the picture!