Poem -
Figure Skater
Light soaked,
star-spattered,
jumping gracefully
light as a fairy and
equally magical
yet powerful all the same.
Chin tipped up,
neck stretched elegantly
fingers rose to meet the sky.
A leap of fate,
whirling emotions
diamonds flashing
a struggle of strength.
Dance a mesmerising dance
to tame the wild,
white beast of the North!
Gliding on ice
immersed in passion,
twirling a fearless tale
luring fabulous creatures
out from the depths of imagination.
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I wanted to be one at some point in my life lolΒ
Shout out to all the figure skaters out thereΒ
I think they're awesome :)
love your poem!
Thanks, Ella!
Always love to see what you have to say :)
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Awesome piece of workΒ
Thanks :)
Hey MITSALI!!......a fine piece of untypical imagery and powerful intent within the confines of this most stellar piece of "Light soaked" and "star spattered" poetic imagery!!....... Love it!!........... keep up the fine work dear poet sister!!!........ALL STARS!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!!.....T xo ?β΄β€
Thank you so much !Β
I really appreciate you always reading and commenting on my poems :)
One of the things I really like about your poems is that you make people go back and reread every line, and yet, They will always find some new level of meaning within them. I think that's a very powerful thing, and It just shows what you've put into each piece. It's complex in it's simplicity. Well Done.
-Dmitri
Well received!
Thanks so much for commenting you really do make my day :)
Stellar read, the imagery and cadence is superb
Thanks :)
I actually did skating for a while it's really coolΒ
Nice poem though
Hello Mitsali...
I used to bring my Skates to School and hang them in my locker...
l would save my lunch money and go to the Rink until it was time to take the City Bus home...
If anyone was looking for me they would find me there or the Pond if it was frozen enough...
I had two pairs of Skates so I didn't ruin my Rink ones...
Friday was the best day at the Rink and I could stay until close and I always got a ride home...
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Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
P.S.Β Thank you for the memories!
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Awe that's so sweet!Β I'm so glad you had the chance to go down memory lane :)
Thank you for taking the time to read my poemΒ
Love it..... thanks
I really liked this. Well done :)
Thanks Y'allΒ :)
This is absolutely gorgeous milady!!!Β ? I am so impressed with your writing skills! WOW!!! Much love fromΒ Happy Jack XOX