Poem -
Run For You
The sound of fiery feet
clap along the paths
through rain and sleet
past sloping hills and ruined mills
past squat houses and rotting sills
grass flying
wind sighing
boots thudding
hair blowing
Run
Not from lifeΒ
nor from knife
heart thumping
legs pumping
Run
Skeleton fall behind
memories stay in mind
clinging fingers fade
Run
as you leave it all behind
and then let it begin
Begin Afresh
Begin Anew
Be free
As you run
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Comments
So much power in this.
Thank you :)
Hi SALLY!!....I Love the way you formatted this piece....It truly helps the flow and the continuity......helping to create that feeling of running and the freedom that can be found there!!.......Always a pleasure to read your stuff girlfriend!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!....and I hope all is well with and yours!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?β΄β€β΄??
Thank you, Tony!
Always a pleasure :)
Great write.
Thanks for sharingΒ
nice to have you backΒ
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Awe Thank you ,
I'm surprised you even noticed I was away!
Mitsali,
You're a wonderful writer, my friend!Β
I could read you all day. Love the way you manipulate words to make the feeling so real. I wish I could write like that.Β
Great job!Β
Matthew.Β
You jest!
You're writing is so much more vivid than mine
Thank you :)
Get out of town, young lady! My writing is like a drying coat of paint being watched by weary eyes, longing to be free from it, while yours is like looking at the sun, resplendent in all it's beauty, but too bright to stare directly at.Β
I win.Β
lol,Β
M.Β
exceptional write. thoroughly enjoyed the read
Thank you for always reading ?
Wowww uplifting poem inspiring moving on and positivity in dark times to be left behind. Your flow is also very admirable. Kudos!
pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, it's nice to hear from fellow poets for exchange of thoughts, Β or else it feels like a monologue.
Thank you so much and I'll definitely read your work :)
The enthusiastic conveyance of " escape " to the freshest field. Where morning dew welcomes in promise, of the fine day. When the dynamic life you want materializes as you have dreamt, for so long.
The will to see pastures of plenty, unfold before your eyes, majestically, is delivered here, admirably. There is beauty in this. And, graceful admittance of the want of more, from every facet of your existence.
Truly captivating. Ambitious complicity with wonderful impressions. Of what holds true, as it always did. The " human condition " spoken of, sincinctly !
Bravo. Formative connection with realistic ideals !
Thanks, for sharing.
:)
A wonderful comment to receive!
Thank you so much I appreciate it more than you would guess xx