The Final Verdict

After the music fades
and we receive
our final performance evaluation
about the audition
that is our lives
The last thing
we need hear
from the booming voice
sitting beneathÂ
the blinding white light
 is
"Try it again
once more with feeling"

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Comments
That's nuts...Telling an artist to feel...MORE
Huh?
sparrowsong
Steve, mind bending and glorious my friend....well said, humor and mixed in with grim reality; you have a beautiful poetic mind....enjoyed your presentation.....cheersÂ