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Fine Lines

Fine Lines

Cut the line make it fine
It could be the last time
Why don't I care who knows
Why don't I care who died
How is it Iā€™m fine

Now I'm high In the sky
I canā€™t die Iā€™m just fine
Do my breaths carry life
Do my dreams create fire
Is this the afterlife
Who cares
Not me
Iā€™m high
So high
Too high
Bye bye

What a shame I became
noone was let down
How could you care now
Just as I slip away
Let me be
Let me go
Iā€™m going home
Got places to see
palaces to burn

You donā€™t understand
You think you do
And thatā€™s all you do

You always come running
When itā€™s far passed too late
Screaming that you care
Screaming youā€™ve been there

Well I am here now
Where are you
Nowhere to be found
Lost in yourself
Like everyone else
In your hopelessness
Your emptiness
Youā€™re a selfish mess
Just like me
Neither of us care
Just like them

One more will do
After ten more
ten more after that
Times ten till the end

Iā€™m escaping you
Escaping this
Iā€™ll be around
You donā€™t escape spirits
Iā€™ll be lingering

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Tony Taylor

Very cool!!..... the cleverly coated stream of consciousness here works well!!...... some VERY creative word choices manifesting as VERY compelling phrasing!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done..... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ā˜€āœ“āœ³

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