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Fine? Or just numb

Fine? Or just numb

Fine,
I feel fine.
But if i was really fine,
why would i shed these tears?
They fall as if the dam wall cracked,
Are my feelings seeping through?
I dont know.
I cry,
As if i lost.
Did i?
Maybe im not fine.
Maybe im just,
Numb

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Dean Kuch

I don't have to tell you that there's a huge difference in feeling fine and feeling numb, Light.
While feeling numb might make everything bearable and seem okay, it's not.
Numbing our feelings–cutting ourselves off from the outside world–is simply a defense mechanism used to dull the pain.
Eventually it can all catch up with you during a particularly lonely moment. That's when you have to hang on for dear life.
Nicely penned. Raw and expressive.
~Dean Kuch ♥???♥

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