Fire Alarm

I liked this Rob, life can feel like we are playing with fire. I think many of us get lost in the smoke and flames. “We don’t need parents” to me this was like “we don’t need guidance” very clever. We can get a little head strong at times. We don’t always realise we are adding fuel to the fire, making life harder for ourselves.A punchy poem cleverly crafted :) 

I sense real bitterness in this. A disillusionary (is that even a word?) write. Pain aside, we are our own true navigators in our lives. An interesting and deceptively deep poem. Well written x