Poem -
Fire Lily
Dedicated to Lorna
Lily comely bell
Pirouette midst dell
Oβ fire acclaim
Laud thy name
Blissfully frolic in rain
Curtsy heavenly ordain
Waft ambrosial scent
βNeath dewdrops spent
Harvest orb weeps
Pigments posy reaps
Partake titian aplenty
Coffers neβer empty
Intrepid starry night
Bequeath bold light
Nary censor thunder
Ignite nosegay wonder
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Comments
Poetess,
This is beautiful. I am trying to find the words I wish to express the feeling I guess reverence as if observing a work of art.. It is just lovely has vividΒ
imagery and word usage is par none.
Great write
Rae
Thank you kindly Rae
Another exceptional write beautifully written and presented, again demonstrating that less is more and only in the way that you can deliver.
And a great tribute to good Lorna.
It is wonderful to read you and then reread, for to write like you do Lisa, without losing sight or structure on what is displayed, is a gift.
Superb.
thank you Shaun Oh how you make me blush
Thanks Lisa, I love it. You capture it so well, I know you would
thanks again
Lorna xx
no problem Lorna. I'm still not a fan of this version though....lol thank you for the challenge though..........