Poem -

Fire lit by Water

Fire lit by Water

hush she is sleeping
hush for the peaceย 
hush she is breathing
hush or just leave
for now-she is water

she is now as still as a Sinthi (flower) on an April day
she now a calm as a caterpillar in a chrysalisย 
she is now who she was and will be
she is now water

unless...
unless the sun does not sit
unless the sun does not sit!
she-is whom must stand-
she is oil

the grease, the dust all witch sits
none that is harmful
until it is lit

lit by a gazeย 
lit by a burn
all of witch you shouldn't admireย 
because now who she was is not who she will be
because now she is FIRE!...
ย 

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noshin sinthi

This is basically talking about a girl with problems and it is being represented by water or a flower or both and then the girl goes through a problem she had no control over which is represented by the oil.Oil on water is not harmful right?Unless it is lit by a match witch in this case is the sun that wont go down.Then the girl didn't get to fix her problems and in the beginning it said ยจshe is now who she was and will be ยจ and in the end it said now ยจ who she was is not who she will beยจ which means her problems never got solved and she became the fire

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Sad Poet

Loved it hope to see more of your writing

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