first love

A bud of beauty new wine so sweet
flowered fields of purity pristine
to taste her lips that no kiss did greet
and hold her close in these arms of mine.
She smiles with warmth her need to fill
to hold him close to feel him near
they lay unclothed they share one will
words of love softly whispered Ā in ear.
Entwined togetherĀ their bodies one
in passion wants and youth dispelledĀ
pleasure sought their thoughts are none
but of themselves their hearts in meld.

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Comments
Very very nicely done!
A topic so commonly written of yet this piece held a little bit of unique technique! :)
My vote forĀ showing how this emotion, so familiar, grabbed me and kept me reading!
Carey x
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