Poem -

Flawless Victory

from the moment we met
you enhanced my days
lifted my life 
in incredible ways
stacking reasons to love
you got me waiting on you jittery
being loved by you is a flawless victory

brick by brick we build four walls
that are never coming down
i will take your calls
play every role
this empire requires
i will nurture your soul
and feed your desires

i receive your tones 
note for note
chord for chord 
i adore what you wrote
i adore what you write
i adore what you sing
music is my country 
and you are my king

i admire the way
you say to focus your mind
so we can make that green 
and find the time
to experience the power that our love will hold
if your heart were metal 
it'd be made of gold

For my love, George

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi LAWschool,

Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote, I like the below lines

i receive your tones 
note for note
chord for chord 
i adore what you wrote
i adore what you write
i adore what you sing
music is my country 
and you are my king

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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