Floating on the Breeze

Floating on the breeze
Nimbus, Cirrus Cumulus Stratus, simple Clouds of the sky,
Floating above us, yet their final destination,remains unknown.
Perched on their high pedestal, as they, relentlessly float by,
Searching somewhere, anywhere, forced nowhere, to call home.
Propelled, like cotton disc by winds, covers of the sun, fillers of rain,
Wind guided destructive missiles, ready to target, their destined strike.
When grey, like the body, stressed and physically, exhaustion of pain,
Congested, neglected, defected, and ready to erupt, with all of their might.
Covers of blanket,, for our prairies and congested streets, down below,
Guardians of skies, is their nature, self appointed, sun opposed curtains.
Means of spectacular, as they place, their, (not one) but many man show,
Sunny to showers, unpredictable, one minute to the next, encore uncertain.
Playing pick-a-boo with the sun, then clouds of tears, you rain upon & share,
Corrupted entry you dare, thus turning days of minutes, into days of hours.
The rain, known to be your fame, a boast of powerful, your game we dare,
Unleashed on all, (their powers) on call, those devastated, eruptive (powers).
Pillows of soft, on days without rain, clouds like memories, they pass us by,
Reflectors, of the strategically, guided sun rays, collectors of liquids, galore.
Reasons of decision non-void, we enjoy your pleasure, without questions why,
So we’ll enjoy your time and the sun, as it shines, as we welcome you, to our door.
Jim
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WOW... lovely poem, love it!!!
Cheers
N.G. Dian
Thanks N.G,
Was just sitting at work, with a little time to kill and simply started staring out of the window and began to daydream, about floating, as the clouds, a long distance to travel yet, a destination totally unknown,by its spectators,such as i and others.....Appreciate the comment..
Cheers,
Jim. .
Wonderful work! It truly speaks for itself :) No doubt you are a great writer :) As a great writer, I would like to ask if you would mind reading my story and telling me if it's something I should continue with into maybe a future book :) I would very much like your input!
Also, you know all of us creative people are like clouds, we get an idea and we let the wind of it take us where ever we wind up :) We brainstorm, we drip with creativity and the finished project is like a ray of sunshine, what most people consider a stroke of genius or pure gold :) Terrible puns I know, haha! But I love your work, please continue writing it :)
Shellandra :)
Shellandra,
You, as William would say,(are one of the most kindest of people), especially after the displacement of Mr. Drake at the moment, whereby, you two being apart at this present moment...You have so much on your mind in his absence, though you still possess the compassion to give thanks, to another...Much appreciative and would be more than honored, to view your (Future) book to be and i am sure, your book, (just as each of your poems), will speak indelibly for itself.. That was a great rendition rendered to the poems meaning and you summed it, (within), more than a nut shell...Your summation was actually the complete poem and given in full perfection by you...You opened my eyes to another dimension to this poem as well..
Thank you very much and in more aspects than one..And hope Mr Drake returns to you very shortly...
Jim
I stand and applaud you on this piece...
What's up Morris,
I applaud you,William,Russ,James,Anthony and many more (gentlemen) on this site, that has kept the communication between all going so strong.....And the (ladies), hey they are always on top of their game,led by (Lady Shirley(Lady Shah)(Ms.Tina)(Sandra D.)(Mrs.Shallandra Drake)and so many many more.....We applaud you all...
Jim
Hello Sir Jimmy,
I dont know how you do this, i am so fascinated by your writes, the way you perceive life is absolutely profound and within each bend evolving and wise, you shine, and you shed, and you feed a hungry soul, with all the might and magic in your bowl.
LOl, i even rhymed for you.
Cheers to you
Shirley
(Lady)Shirley,
Thank you so much and it is you and William, that has owned this site, with all the positive comments,that anyone could, not only ask for but pay for, as well..Each and every word that you utter, somehow, whether you meant to or not, just falls right into the flow of poetry, even before you grace us with their presents.One word of yours, has a air of (AW) attached, when you speak it, making the viewer, that much more hungry, to follow you throughout this funnel,hoping you rest your weary, (from flight), over exposed and over utilized wings, due to the feathers, from those wings, that you have allowed to be without, as we use them, as our writing utensils, to create brighter, better and closer communications, amongst us all. Allowing your warm passion for all, to be our elixir of permanent ink, that you have replenished for us all........(The Dove of Peace), has spoken oF you and of you, his speakings were wrote,strong and shall always be written, for your name shouts of, (COMPASSION FOR ALL)...........Nobody can be Shirley better than you, for your mold was one of uniqueness.........
Forever,
Jimmy L.Arnold
hi Jimmy no clouding the brightness of this one great write x
Thank you a bunch susan, you humble me.
Jim
an inspiration for me to write a new poem soon .. loved it.. how you do it?? well however you do it, there must be a drop of your heart in every piece you create
Thanks Meenakshi,
with one line you have summed this poem up and you did it quite beautifully...Sounds like another poem could be derived from this one lovely single line.
Thank You,
Jimmy
There must be a drop of your heart in every piece you create.
Mrs. Shah,
As always, all that i do is inspired by you and Lady Shirley..
Thank you,
Jimmy