Flounder
The rapture swirls around my mouth,
sickly sweet, with heartful fervor
whispering melodic allures.
The wash of a connoisseur,
delectable on this excitable palette,
a god's rein
in sinful concave galaxy.
My gargle echoes among the shadows,
lining a lustful soul, an unwanted,
slipping, intervention.Â
captivating to the
last moment
Collapse, drain, spout out from the
deep body that cherishes heightened words
into foreboading sea, immediately
momentary.
Drifting dreams escape me,Â
the taste crudely igniting memories,
with an open mouth IÂ
gasp, floundering,Â
for
one
more
moment.Â
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The final lines of this poem are absolutely BRILLIANT!!......washing over me.... I froze....... and bathed in the ...floundering!!.....wow!........T ♥
Thank you so much, Tony! Always a pleasure to have you stop by. Much appreciated!Â
Such musical use of your words! Not only painting but moving, a pleasure as they fall from the tongue and hang in the air, Certainly a poem to be read aloud and freed to dance atmospereically.
I enjoyed this over and over.
John
Thank you John, it is a pleasure to know that you enjoyed reading this aloud, it is definitely written to fall a certain way on the tongue when spoken. Wonderful feedback as always.
-LeahÂ
Emotional content heightens interest in this work, displaying passionate involvement in the craft and its purposeful dynamism.
Thanks for sharing. :)