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Foolish Pride

Foolish Pride

My burning desire escalates…
a volcanic eruption of aching emotion;
an all-consuming fire
enraptured, captured in the essence
of the memories of your face.

Now, cerise flames flicker,
empathetic embers bleed,
casting a dying orange glow
upon the cold, wooden floor.

Shadows—like shape-shifting specters
writhe, wriggle and dance.
Perfectly pirouetting portrayals
of pure pain.

A cacophonous sarcophagus
of never ending concupiscence
echoes with the silken sultry softness
of your sweet voice.

Amorphous angels
sing mellifluous lullabies
in alleyways, near trash bins,
swathed in sordid, satin shawls,
then sit silently, in splendid surrender
amazed at the sound of their own voices.

I had you for one fleeting moment,
held you in my arms,
tasted your deepest, darkest desires.

Maybe I drank too deeply,
too much.
swallowed too fast…

When, perhaps, what I
should have been swallowing
was my own foolish pride.

**This poem was written as part of a dual challenge between Greg Tucker and myself.
I told him that if he wrote a spooky sonnet—which he did, and quite well, I might add—I would, in turn, try to write a romantic contemporary free verse poem.
Well, Greg...this is about as "romantic" as I get, my friend.
Thanks for reading...**

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Elizzie R

This is brilliant, I love how the poem is structured and how an ominous tone is fuelled by foreshadowing comments throughout your poem. Fantastic write! 
-Elizzie

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Dean Kuch

Thank you very much for your encouraging comments as well as taking the time to read this in the first place, Elizzie.
I rarely write contemporary free verse poetry. So, I'm doubly grateful to you for your positive response.
Hugs!
~Dean ♥♫?♪♥

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Dean
Seriously I think this is among the best work you have written!  Bravo Bravo!  The i imagery was succulent!

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Dean Kuch

Thank you for challenging me to step outside of my comfort zone, Greg.
I'm very relieved, as well as elated, that you enjoyed this.
Pleasant screams, my friend...
~Dean ?

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Susan Chetcuti

Well written Dean. The challange paid off as you combined a touch of darkness in with passion. This can only be done with someone who has unique talent and you nailed it. I’m so glad that you continue to post here in showing others your great work as they become familiar with your creativity. Again well done??

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Dean Kuch

Thanks so much, Susan. That's very kind of you to say.
You are an extremely talented poet yourself and I really enjoy reading your work.
Thanks again for reading.
Warmest wishes!
~Dean ♪♫♥❤️♥♫♪

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