I once had a castle
so precious and out of reach
I built it upon
a sandy little beach.
And then it happened
in a sudden one day
The ocean came and drew
My castle away.
The succinct delivery of this write makes it even more powerful..... and the wide open phrasing helps it be so easy to relate to ........VERY clever approach to such serious subject matter!!...... you go girl!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done ROBYNLEE!!....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
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The succinct delivery of this write makes it even more powerful..... and the wide open phrasing helps it be so easy to relate to ........VERY clever approach to such serious subject matter!!...... you go girl!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done ROBYNLEE!!....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Thank you Tony! ??☮️