Fore and Aft
this experimental .. a bit like me maybe :)
She loved his fore ..
He loved her aft ..
She loved his rise ..
He loved her fall ..
She loved him up
He loved her down
They loved each other
First and last ..
No fucking in-betweens
No not a single one at all ..
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Experimental or not it reads superb Nev.
And hats off to you squire.
Thanking you for writing (and not afraid to) to put up something from poetries left field and why not.
And loved reading your latest poetry book Cotton Girls & Paper Chains and your poem Opus bloody shines among many more.
Enjoyed reading this and all power and kudos to your imagination and poetry elbow.
Shaun, as is almost always the case my dear friend, I find myself unable to thank you enough for the very kind and encouraging sentiments you have so generously bestowed upon me and my scribble .. Furthermore, the fact that you have given my latest anthology a free plug is worth its weight in gold .. or very nearly .. I do so hope that You & Yours remain both safe and well & wish you all the very best of all good things,
Neville :)
You is doing good Nev and Yours is currently in the land of nod!!
Thanks mate and all the best.
Then I wish you many restful zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz's sir .. & those by the way are horizontal N's ............................................... Thanks again pall :)
this is so awsome
Cheers Greg ..
Cheers my friend
WOW!! NEVILLE!!....beautifully creative my friend.....and powerfully succinct.....I have to say that Shaun's comment is most intriguing as well.......ALL STARS!!....do keep up the great work......your creativity has no bounds brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Hey thank you Mr. T that is very kind of you brother .. is there any particular bit of said absolutely jolly decent fellow and friends comment that you find particularly intriguing .. am askin for a friend you understand who as far as I am able to determine is intrigued as well ..................... Love n Rockets back at you sir ............... Neville :)
My word aren’t we the clever clogs 😊 love this for not just the word play but also the fact the structure is so fitting to the piece. Each one is the start and end for the other and nothing else is in between. Great reflection on the sentiment being delivered here. Just yay yay clever writing Neville. Please feel free to experiment more x 🙃
sounds like a plan ... and thank you Gwen :) x