Forever and Always
Dedicated to our lovely Gwendoline for her beautifully penned lines, With love Pratibha x
To my love
Writing this letter is my only way, to tell you, what you mean to me
My heart, my soul, misses you so dearly
You are my sun and moon
Each day and night, I want to spend it with you
I long for your tender touch, your rich embrace
To be ever so close and to kiss your graceful face
Missing your laughter, your smile, your loving arms
All the things we would do if we were close enough
I remember the sweet scent of lush lavender
It still lingers the air, closing my eyes, wishing you were here
My memories of us grow fonder each day,
As my heart aches for you, I can't keep it contained
Our handwritten letters have kept me alive
Each one, in my drawer, to help me survive
Never forgetting the magic we brought together
Endearing, elating, and just totally amazing
Today, I'm aching inside, a big part of me just wants to whittle and die
To be without you is too painful to bear
But I know our love was truly great and beautifully rare
It shall never be lost, moved or changed
Forever in my heart, strong, alive, and remembered always
Be at peace my love
And I'll soon meet you there
Your loving wife
Forever and always x
Like 4 Pin it 4Poem was written via a word prompt - Love Letters
Pratibha Savani
04-10-2021
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Wow P, this is a BEAUTIFUL write my friend. It speaks of the power of love. How no matter where it takes us, be that together or apart. Love never dies. How certain things can keep us attached to that aching longing. Like the letters in this poem. Your wording is just so delicate and elegant. Truly a melt the reader poem, and all from a word prompt WOW 👌 you are a classy writer P. Then you gift your poem to me 💜 I can't thank you enough for the dedication and kind words written. I am shocked and delighted 🙂💛 you have a heart of gold P. So generous all the time in whatever you are focused on. A wonderful writer / artist. With a beautiful mindset towards life. I am so happy I get to call you my friend
Gwen 💜 💜 xx
Hi Gwen. Wow thank you for the amazing reply!! I just happy you love it and that my love letter message came out loud and clear. Cos you described it perfectly. Its is of a love lost but everlasting even outside the material plane in our existence of life. I got an excellence award for it in pop.
I am too very grateful to call you my friend. Thank you for this wonderful reply 🙏🏽😘😘😘
your friend Px
A beautiful write by a beautiful lady for a beautiful lady...wonderful P and Gwen is truly truly deserving 💕
Thank you Marion. She sure is. Lovely to be back on cosmo when I get the time. Have missed you too. Px💜💜💜
Wow what a wonderful poem
Just wow I love this poem
you are a great writer
this is a masterpiece
sorry I missed this from yesterday
Wow Greg thank you for that amazing response. I havent thought of me as a great writer...so thank you! I think marion, jill, gwen, shaun, tina to name a few are brilliant, great strong writers. So really appreciate this comment my friend 🙏🏽😘💜💜💜
Wisdom from a friend from afar who would say never thank you’re not a great writer when you are always believe in yourself never worry about other writers and do your own thing you know who that is Cherie sumner
Very wise words recited Greg...thank you! And you take them in too....speaking of Cherie, I must message her it's been months!! Thanks for the lovely reminder that we are all unique in our own pen ful way 💜💜💜🙏🏽
You should she would love to hear from you she’s doing well
Aaww that's good to hear...I will message her...summer just went by!
WOW!!.....PRATIBHA!!....what a powerfully compelling piece of poetic longing and loveliness.....a timeless piece.......that represents love's enduring nature.....that bond that cannot be broken......and to dedicate this to GWEN is a stroke of genius for her words have the kind of strength and beauty that these lines represent!!.....Truly, well done my friend.....bravo to you!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....VERY well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo : )
Hi Tony. I havent been on cosmo much so thank you for reading and this lovely comment. It really helps when u add comments like a timeless piece to know it reads well.
Gwen is an amazing writer and I really wanted to dedicate this to her.
Look fwd to catching up on your poems soon. Thank you for the pin and again really made me happy to read your feedback. Px
Pratibha I'm late to your party and one lovingly and respectfully decked out for guest of honour Gwen as well.
You certainly have achieved in setting the right tone for a letter of love.
Elegant and timeless writing that never loses its empathic sight or balance just one written from the heart.
And its a big heart my friend.
Anyone would dearly wish to receive and treasure.
Great poem Pratibha and always good to see you vary your themes and idea's when writing.
A poet of distinction mirrored in your poetry.
I wish you well my friend and thank you for sharing and writing a poem to an equally respected poet we call Gwen.
Who like your good self, knows how to write quality that stands out.
Take care my friend and I wish you well and your family too. x.
Shaun.
Hi Shaun my friend. Thank you for reading and revisiting. You have given me a huge amount of support when it comes to my writing and your descriptive words used, sometimes even I'm surprised. It means alot to have this.
Im part of the facebook that do weekly contests and this was one of the themes to write about. So I have been writing on different themes regularly. It's been fascinating.
I'll take timeless for my piece. I knew what I wanted to write. It's so good when we know what we want to write.
Likewise you are an amazing poet. You've really done some different styles in the ones I've read. Look fwd to reading some more.
Thank you for the lovely pin and comments. Px
Pratibha just re-visiting your touch of class and hope all is well.
Take care and one day at a time my friend.
Time heals, albeit slowly, but still heals.
Your friend,
Shaun. x.
Thank you Shaun. Yes definitely. I'll be ok. I know I will. Px