Poem -

Forever Vulnerable

Like a child in the dark
Like a dog with no bark
Like a never ending night
Like a bird without flight
Like a mind inside a vault
Like all the ones at fault
I go to the wrong places
Looking for the right thing
Always meeting the same faces
You’re not there to greet me, gal
You’re forever vulnerable

Like a black eyed woman
Like forty-five in Japan
Like a cloud without a sky
A human with nothing to buy
Like a soldier with a spear
An elephant with no ears
I go to the wrong places
Looking for the right thing
Always meeting the same faces
You’re not there to greet me, gal
You’re forever vulnerable

Like a tree with no soil
Like a country with oil
A body without sleep
Like a herd of sheep
Like a kid in school
Like a working fool
A car with no wheels
Like someone who feels
Like a wingless plane
Like a ball and chain
Like a wedding ring
A guitar with one string
I go to the wrong places
Looking for the right thing
Always meeting the same faces
You’re not there to greet me, gal
You’re forever vulnerable
 

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Ezrarimbaud

Thanks Pratibha. Appreciate your Feedback as always. I’m happy you enjoyed it x

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Being Me

I like this! It reads fast and flows well. The refrain leaves the reader digging a little deeper and in doing so, is rewarded with that extra bit of emotion that welds this whole poem into place x

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Ezrarimbaud

Thanks Christina. I have a hard time writing about love. It takes a lot of energy and isn’t my strong point. I appreciate your support always! 

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Nine Eleven

Reads like a rock song, great poetry Ezrarimbaud.

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Ezrarimbaud

Most of my stuff is lyrics tbh Gerard I’m not a poet in the standard sense. Appreciate you giving me the feedback. Look forward to more poetry from you. 

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Bill MacEachern

Excellent Ezra, sounds familiar, not the poem per say, but what it says...
 

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Ezrarimbaud

Thanks Bill! I think we’ve all been there vulnerable at some point relationship wise. Appreciate the feedback! 

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