FORGIVE ME (FIRST SONG)
Since I can’t sing I decided to write my own lyrics and post them below.
(Please forgive me)
You don’t know what’s coming
Today you will die
I will never forget it
The look in your eyes
You are so pathetic
Get ready to bleed
Baby, I had you begging
On your dirty little knees
Reach for my hand
It’s time to play
Your toxic love
Has me screaming again
I can’t wait to make it all end
The fault within you
Is seething through my veins
I can’t wait to feel your pain
(Please forgive me)
Such a pretty little mess
How does this make sense?
I need to make amends
You’re too late to be saved
Blood dripping down you are going to drown
Now you see me coming
Keep holding your breath
You will never get away love
Blood pouring from your chest
Your fear is overwhelming
As we all circle and laugh
Here comes the knife now
To slice your pretty face in half
Reach for my hand
I still want to play
Your toxic love
Has me screaming again
I can’t wait to make it all end
The fault within you
Is seething through my veins
I can’t wait to feel your pain
(Please forgive me)
Such a pretty little mess
How does this make sense?
I need to make amends
You’re too late to be saved
Blood dripping down you are going to drown
I know that look inside your eyes
A coward too eager to hide
Unwilling to sacrifice your life
It’s your fault tonight you die
[3X]
Beyond the grave
Please forgive me
I’m sorry love
I’ve created this wreck
Your toxic love
Has me screaming again
I can’t wait to make it all end
The fault within you
Is seething through my veins
I can’t wait to feel your pain
(Please forgive me)
Such a pretty little mess
How does this make sense?
I need to make amends
You’re too late to be saved
Blood dripping down you are going to drown
(Please forgive me)
© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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"Your toxic love
Has me screaming again
I can’t wait to make it all end
The fault within you
Is seething through my veins
I can’t wait to feel your pain
(Please forgive me)
Such a pretty little mess
How does this make sense?
you shouldn't call it an attempt sweet val, everything has a place, a brilliant death metal tune from your creative self, a hurtful pleading love, blinded by intoxication of loves dark obsession, the music video goes well with it, well done great write, love to you nardine xoxo
Hi sweet Nardine! Thank you for your lovely comment...I was so unsure about myself and kept questioning whether I should post this one or not. But you made me feel so much better and I appreciate your thoughtful words more than you know!Â
Much Love to You!
Val ♥️
It's great sweetheart, truly xoxo
Thank you love! A huge compliment coming from you!
Val ♥️
Great Song lyric dear Sister Poetess Valerie Lynn,
My applause, my love, my vote. I love the below lines:
Obsessive love is a hypothetical state in which one person feels an overwhelming obsessive desire to possess another person or event, Here Poetess expresses her approach towards what she feels, i.e  a strong attraction, with an inability to accept failure or rejection. Such a state should be differentiated from relationship obsessive-compulsive disorder and relationship obsessive disorder that commonly includes doubts regarding one's own feelings towards an intimate action, preoccupation with the her own feelings towards oneself, doubts about the “rightness” of the relationship and preoccupation with the perceived flaws on life itself, Here in this song, the partner is symbolically depicted as death.
Great write from the golden pen of poetess Valerie Lynn.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Wow Williamsji I really love how you broke down the lyrics and interpreted them. Very nice! Much Love to you! Thank you so much for reading this song!Â
Love,
Val ♥️
" Please forgive me such a pretty little mess!!".........crazy good girlfriend.........video rocked..........loved your lyric line sweetie..........dark and glorious..........very cool...........just remember tony loves you........dark lady...............you're so talented......I used to write for "Rude Awakening" (late 80's early 90's) Nidus productions went on tour for years with those crazy rock hounds.......lotsa partying..........can groove with you sister..........smiles .........t xx
That is so awesome you got to write for a band! That would be my ultimate fantasy since there's no chance I could ever sing for one haha! Thank you so much for watching the video and reading my first attempt at writing lyrics. You are one amazing man!
Much Love!
Val ♥️
holy ^&*(&^ she like hates them or him but is addicted to the pain the rage and emotion portrayed when when you right with the music playing the reader really get a trip of emotions alll together at once.
Tim you are awesome!!! You are the one who gave me advice on how to write a song so I took it and attempted to write one. Appreciate the comment!! :)
Val ♥️
You did a great job on your first song!!!
Thanks love!! ♥️