Fractions
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Me
More pain
More time
More places to hide
More stacks of lies
More reasons to cry
More hate
Its fate
More worries
In a trance
Cus the hurt is on the inside. As I`m singing - I dance, clock tick ticking. Feelings can`t grasp.
Society
Need more money
Need more time
You're wasting your life
Like a weirdo inside
Get some friends
Get a wife
Open up
Get drunk in the dark
Oh, don`t start. When I`m connected I`m apart. In a crowd like a sea. Feel empty to the knees.
Everyone else
Clockwork
How does that work?
Rather try and learn
Rather love than earn
Rather cut than drill
Then saw my sores
I`d take a pill
Just to know how it tastes
Cus it’s a waste. Everyone’s got somewhere to be - Haste. Am I just treading water?
Or just running late.
The Fish of the Sea
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great write! I can feel the turmoil of emotions in this, good job TFOTS.
Thanks, Bell! This one is actually inspired by a song, not the one I posted with it lol. Your comments always mean so much. Kind regards, your biggest fan. TFOTS
Tell me about it TFOTS. Nice one.Â
Glad you could relate Cleo! Thanks so much. Best wishes to you. TFOTS
Brilliant just brilliant.Â
Love it.Â
Use that pain to fuel your ambition and eventually your destiny will arrive.Â
Love to you , joy to you.Â
Peace and quiet too.Â
Others are privileged to know you.Â
Thanks so much, Liliana, I`m really glad it resonated with you. Find the ambition through the pain, lasting - through the night and day. Comments lift me up this way. Thank you kindly, so much in every way. Really means a lot. Best wishes to you Liliana!Â
Keep developing that gift, because you have one! enjoyed it Max!....................Jim
Thanks so much Jim! I`m really touched that you say that about my work. Means so much. Kind regards, your friend Max
I really love this one! You're doing great! - Luma xo
Thanks Luma~ means so much~Â
Oh...like this Max...kind of frantic and searching feel to it...questions /meanings...ever running to find answers...let me know if you find any...I'm.still searching 🤗🤗
Hey...looks like Liliana's vote has registered 3 times lol...
Amen to that Marion, another inspiration from a song lol XD, haven't found any answers yet! Kudos to you caring poet and friend. Really supportive of everyone on here. Best wishes to you. Max
So relatable to read. At work one never has time to think before the phone rings again, at home one only really would like to sleep but then you must be company and so forth. Love this piece. John
Thanks so much John, and so very true. The busyness of life! I should be grateful that others have it worse off than me. Thanks so much for your kind comment. Means so much. Best wishes to you. TFOTSÂ
all smiles nice write
Thanks so much Lorris, it means a lot that you comment on my work. Kind regards and best wishes. TFOTSÂ
Great write from a great human beingÂ
Awww means so much Kieran thank you! Touching for you to say that, I`m not a perfect one though lol XD! Thanks again, Kieran. TFOTS
This one isn't a rant and sounds positive in many places ;)
Thanks, Yiyan! And your absolutely true, more a protest against social norms and a fight for values of love over money. Thanks for picking that out ;). All smiles, best wishes to you. Your friend, TFOTS