Poem -
Fractions of Fractions
Mirrors Everywhere
Fake news, I`m tired
Friendly fire, heart's desire
Bullets bounce, president denounced
Flying faster - higher.
It`s unfair, terrorist scare,
What to wear, not to share,
Explosions thud, blood through the mud
Breathing in the air.
Need a rest, for the best
Knife in the back, through the chest
Who wonders, who worries, who weeps
Wind blowing for no less
Everything is a mirror
No matter what they say
These Mirrors are reflections
That only work one way
No one cares, but you
We look the other way
Yet we only gaze ourselves
Every. Single. Day.
Mirrors Everywhere
The Fish of the Sea
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Comments
Pretty powerful Max! Evil flourishes if good men do nothing! is my vibe. Keep on swimming my friend !.......................Jim
XD thanks so much, Jim! So very true, seems a bit chaotic right now... Stay safe! Best wishes, your friend Max
Hi Max, I believe the first step in making a difference starts with me and you. So yeah, 'we only gaze at ourselves'. Nice one.Â
Hi Cleo! Thanks so much and so very true, it does seem like we get caught in the minor details sometimes and forget about the bigger picture though. Although I belive everyone has the same goal, making a positive impact on society, but that just makes it 10 times hard to achieve... I really enjoy your comments thanks again, kind regards.
Throw the bastards out...every last one of them.in every country!! Start again!! The political systems of this world are now too corrupt ever to be changed...nice write 🤗
Tis true Marion, it's like an article I read about labour / Republican being to immoral and liberal / Democrat too corrupt... seems like it's not just one country... so very sad. Kind regards, thanks Marion, your friend Max
Good to see you take on problems of society in general - this is politics.
Not entirely sure about the following (but sure you have your own logic)
Lol I tried Yiyan! Not sure about my attempt though ;) Yes the mirror analogy is about how society only focuses on themselves rather that the benefits of other. Perhaps a materialism metaphor is what I was trying to accomplish. Thanks so much for you comments though! Haven't had a lot of time to read others work lately, but I'll get round to it this arvo. Peace to you my friend! Kind regards, TFOTSÂ
So true my insightful friend.Â
Thanks so much Liliana!